Insanity Candoramity: Insurgent

Title: Insurgent
Author: Veronica Roth
My Rating: 3.2
See Vanessa's Review

Wow. First of all I would like to say that Insurgent blew Divergent right out of the water. Secondly, I would like to say that it still didn't live up to my expectations.
This is a beautiful plot, with an amazing setting. The idea behind this book is fantastic, but the execution leaves something to be desired.

First half of this book was...zzzzzzzzz. Huh? Oh, sorry! I fell asleep just thinking about it. So boring, so completely useless.
Second half of this book was...not that great either. But I'm holding my head high, and praying that it's just fallen prey to the "second book curse" and is just setting up the series for a majestic ending to end all endings. *crossing fingers*


And then there were spoilers... (skip to the next purple bit if you don't want them)

Let us begin with the characters. I would like to blatantly say that none of the characters in this story caught my attention. You never fell in love with them. You never hated them. It was like reading a news article about people you don't know, something that doesn't affect you. Seriously, when they started bring back characters...I couldn't remember who they were. I had to go back to the Divergent and re-read parts to remember what the characters had done (I forgot that Will died...and who Will was in the first place)

Tris is...weak. I actually liked her a bit more in the first book. In this one, she seems to spend too much time trying to deal with the death of her parents and Will. Now, while I understand that this had to be hard for her, it still seemed too much. Also, her aversion to guns, while creating an extra conflict in the story, was extremely annoying after multiple mentions. Her insistence on dying for the first half of the book was alarming, but finally tapered off after she "died". One of her redeeming qualities is her divergence, which finally came into play in this book (thank god). Her aptitude for Erudite was very interesting as we witnessed her develop plans and beat Jeanine at her own game.

Moving on to Tobias/Four/whateveryouwannacallhim. Where? Did? He? Go?
Yes, I understand that this book revolves around Tris, and she was always going off by herself and risking her life (and Tobias had to come and save her...multiple times). But seriously, it was like he didn't even exist at times. Tobias was Tris's redeeming quality. Tobias was what made Tris interesting. Yet Roth constantly left him out of the plot line. Why? I don't know.

Even though no time passed between the first and second books, I felt like the characters were completely different. The relationship felt forced. It didn't feel real. Not because the characters didn't feel it. But more like Roth didn't. The relationship seemed to take a backseat (which isn't always a bad thing), and the story lost some of its luster. Don't get me wrong. The relationship was definitely there. They make out every chapter for the first half of the book. But then Tobias tells Tris to be safe, Tris promises to, Tobias falls asleep, Tris slips out to risk her life. EVERY TIME. There just wasn't a point.

There were some nice twists that came about in the second half of the book. Peter, finally, turned out to be (moderately) good, and helped to save the plot. Caleb turned out to be bad. Which I guess didn't surprise me since his presence in the story was ultimately useless otherwise.

You are safe now... (no more spoilers from here on)

I would like to state that NO ONE IN THIS BOOK IS EVIL. Jeanine is disturbed. But not evil. I didn't hate her. I just found her annoying. Like a mosquito. Or draperies.

Let's just say that no one is this book is endearing, nor is anyone despicable. They are forgettable at best.

Oh goodness. What happened at the end? It was so strange. I'm not going to talk about it. You can draw your own conclusions. I hate all book endings.

So, after reading this entire review, you are probably wondering why on earth I gave this book three stars? Because the main idea behind this is brilliant. I love the factions. I love the simulations. Let's face it. I'm Jeanine.

While I do find the factions...useless (they never really are explained), and the whole, "Dauntless have to have tats and piercings. They have to jump of trains and pull bullets out of their abdomens without pain killers," and "Erudite have to wear glasses," and "Amity have to act like hippies and be pumped full of drugs so that they act like hippies," is moderately annoying. It's almost too cliche.

But I still LOVE it. If you ignore the serious lack of story line and character building...this book is AMAZING.

In conclusion. It's worth the read in my opinion. The setting is unbeatable. Use your imagination. If you're looking for a quick read, it's totally worth it.

A story about choices: Insurgent

Title: Insurgent

Author: Veronica Roth

My Rating: 4.75/5

See review of Insurgent's prequel: Divergent

"One choice can transform you--or it can destroy you. But every choice has consequences, and as unrest surges in the factions all around her, Tris Prior must continue trying to save those she loves--and herself--while grappling with haunting questions of grief and forgiveness, identity and loyalty, politics and love.

Tris's initiation day should have been marked by celebration and victory with her chosen faction; instead, the day ended with unspeakable horrors. War now looms as conflict between the factions and their ideologies grows. And in times of war, sides must be chosen, secrets will emerge, and choices will become even more irrevocable--and even more powerful. Transformed by her own decisions but also by haunting grief and guilt, radical new discoveries, and shifting relationships, Tris must fully embrace her Divergence, even if she does not know what she may lose by doing so.

"New York Times" bestselling author Veronica Roth's much-anticipated second book of the dystopian "Divergent" series is another intoxicating thrill ride of a story, rich with hallmark twists, heartbreaks, romance, and powerful insights about human nature."

*mild spoilers*

This review will be on the short side...ish...because I'm tired...and because I can't wait for the third book to come out!

In most series, the pattern is that the first one always tends to be the best (with the exception of Harry Potter). I was worried this would happen to Divergent, and I'm so very happy to announce: it didn't! 

Insurgent did not disappoint. In many ways, I think it far outshone Divergent.

Pacing. The pacing in Insurgent is much better than Divergent, with less "meaningless" episodes and more logical, emotional events that will make you laugh and cry and get so nervous/frustrated you wan't to punch a wall.

Relationship. Who else thinks romance without a triangle worked perfectly fine? I was wondering whether Roth would put a love triangle in here, and I'm glad she thought better. With such thick events (war, deaths, grief, etc) going on, a triangle would seem unnecessary. The relationship between Tris and Tobias alone was satisfying enough, and full of tension and emotion.

Emotion. I think Roth did a spectacular job on this. Since her mother is a psychologist, there is no wonder how accurate some of the scientific facts in this books are (the explanation about functions of brian parts, etc). I like how things make sense in this book-it strengthens the reading experience immensely (not saying Divergent didn't make sense).

One thing lacking, though, if anything, would be Roth's character-building. Her world-building is clearly fascinating, but she seems to do not as well in characters. In Insurgent, I didn't feel as attached when some characters died, because Roth simply didn't flesh them out enough for me to root for them. The only characters whose intentions I truly understand are Tris, Tobias, sometimes Christina, and sometimes Christina. I think Marcus definitely needs to be worked on more...in the next book.

Overall it was better than Divergent and a truly thrilling read. I loved it!

*fangirl moment*

YAY TOMORROW'S FOURTRIS DAY!! 6/4 ("six and four, four and six"-well technically there could be two fourtris days...)

A story about courage: Divergent

Title: Divergent

Author: Veronica Roth

My Rating: 4.5/5

“In Beatrice Prior's dystopian Chicago world, society is divided into five factions, each dedicated to the cultivation of a particular virtue--Candor (the honest), Abnegation (the selfless), Dauntless (the brave), Amity (the peaceful), and Erudite (the intelligent). On an appointed day of every year, all sixteen-year-olds must select the faction to which they will devote the rest of their lives. For Beatrice, the decision is between staying with her family and being who she really is--she can't have both. So she makes a choice that surprises everyone, including herself.

During the highly competitive initiation that follows, Beatrice renames herself Tris and struggles alongside her fellow initiates to live out the choice they have made. Together they must undergo extreme physical tests of endurance and intense psychological simulations, some with devastating consequences. As initiation transforms them all, Tris must determine who her friends really are--and where, exactly, a romance with a sometimes fascinating, sometimes exasperating boy fits into the life she's chosen. But Tris also has a secret, one she's kept hidden from everyone because she's been warned it can mean death. And as she discovers unrest and growing conflict that threaten to unravel her seemingly perfect society, she also learns that her secret might help her save those she loves . . . or it might destroy her.”

*mild spoilers*

Alright. Deep breaths. Review time. Can't do it. Still too shaky from the last 70 pages of this book. And that ending. Oh gawd.

Okay. Let's get down to business.

First off, I'd like to address all the things I wasn't so crazy about. That way when I talk about how the last 70 pages and some other moments totally redeemed the story, you will know what I'm talking about.

Excuse me for one second. Have to go put on my steel suit, so when Divergent maniacs throw rotten tomatoes at me I'll be unharmed. Anyways. Here goes:

the pacing/meaningfulness. I get that Veronica Roth is trying to give us readers a thrill ride by putting in exciting events every once in a little while, from the train jumps, to the Pit, to the chasm, to the Hancock building, and so on. But I just wish they weren't so meaningless. I'm not saying I didn't enjoy the adrenaline kicks as I read them, I just can't fully embrace the deeper ideas behind them (probably because there aren't any). I get that the initiation is important, but I just wish Roth'd condense things more, because some parts just seemed a little unnecessary.

the factions. I pay tribute to the well thought-out characters of the factions(dauntless, abnegation, candor, erudite, amity), and do think they're very very interesting and worth writing about/reading about. However, one little thing that disappointed me is how Roth made the faction people appear to be. Who said tattoos and piercings have anything to do with fearlessness? To me it's just more reckless gangster, which isn't a good image. I wish Roth used less stereotype in describing the factions. Maybe then I'd embrace Dauntless more. Right now I just see them as a bunch of reckless teenagers who don't think before they do things (with the exception of Tris and Four, because I love them too much).

That being said, Divergent isn't perfect. But...let's move on to the good stuff here...drumroll, please!

Tris. She is a very likable characters. Unlike Katniss(forgive me, I had to draw a comparison, although I love them both), Tris is more selfless in some sense. She is more willing to sacrifice, and readily (more readily than she lets on in the beginning of the story). Her character growth is interesting to watch, and quite mesmerizing to me. I like how her mind matures and grows a thicker skin. She is loud, annoying at times, weak at other, and insecure. She is real. Relatable.

Four. Okay. I have to be a little girl here for a few moments. AHHHHH FOUR!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU FORGET TRIS AND BE MINE!!!!! Okay. That's that. I really like the mystery that surrounds him, and his seemingly dual character (toughness vs. kindness). The multi-factedness of his character makes him very real and believable, and his weaknesses (although only four fears) make him likable (that and his charming appearance ;)

The discussion of humanity. Although I wish Roth explained more about the coming-into-being of the factions, I really enjoyed her thoughtfulness on characters of humanity. Through Tris's struggle between her identity as Abnegation and Dauntless, Roth discusses the similarities between selflessness and bravery-that they are, in truth, very similar. I agree with her very much on this. And I think this is one of the things that sets Tris apart from the other initiates/Dauntless. She is selfless first, then brave. This marks her as loving and caring as well, and saves her from becoming a merely powerful cruel person (like Peter). In addition, I also enjoyed reading about the Erudite, and how knowledge can be destructive, if used wrongfully. I would love to see more of Amity and Candor in the sequels (from the cover of Insurgent I can already tell I will learn a fair amount about Amity in that book).

The last 70 pages (or so). The imagination is raw and creative and eye-opening. Here's my salute to Roth. The simulations and the serum and the conspiracy is truly well thought-out and amazingly written. The last part of the story is the best part, truly engrossing and compelling. I'm sure parts of it will bring you to tears, as it did me. The power in the last part of the story cannot be overstated. I promised not to give away too much, so you'll have to read the story to know. All I can say is it's powerful.

So yeah, that's it. Overall I thoroughly enjoyed the book and would recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and captivating read